Comments on: KHUDKUSH BAMBAAR LARKAY SAY – a poem http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/ Just another WordPress site Mon, 06 Feb 2012 08:58:48 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Sunil Amar, journalist http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-20009 Sunil Amar, journalist Mon, 13 Sep 2010 01:35:54 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-20009 Neelum ! your feelings are deep. Neelum ! your feelings are deep.

]]> By: نیلم احمد بشیر Nilum Ahmed Bashir http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-13484 نیلم احمد بشیر Nilum Ahmed Bashir Sun, 29 Nov 2009 01:46:32 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-13484 <!--%kramer-ref-pre%-->[...] KHUDKUSH BAMBAAR LARKAY SAY surkh saibon jaisay gaalon waalay khoobsurat larkay    tumhara naam kya hai?    kya kaha abdulqayyum?      aray meray munnay ka bhi to yehi naam hai  wohi jo subah isi raastay say school gaya hai jis pay tum jacket pehnay jaray ho tumhain kaheen mila to nahi    shukar hai iss waqt tak tou woh school pohunch gaya ho ga uss ke abu isshi sarak ki ek police chauki pe pehra de rahay hein Abdul Qayyum un se roz galay mil ke jaata hai tum ne unhein dekha tou nahi? Khudara unhein apna naam na bata dena kaheen woh tumhei bhee galay se na laga lein ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔             [...]<!--%kramer-ref-post%--> [...] KHUDKUSH BAMBAAR LARKAY SAY surkh saibon jaisay gaalon waalay khoobsurat larkay    tumhara naam kya hai?    kya kaha abdulqayyum?      aray meray munnay ka bhi to yehi naam hai  wohi jo subah isi raastay say school gaya hai jis pay tum jacket pehnay jaray ho tumhain kaheen mila to nahi    shukar hai iss waqt tak tou woh school pohunch gaya ho ga uss ke abu isshi sarak ki ek police chauki pe pehra de rahay hein Abdul Qayyum un se roz galay mil ke jaata hai tum ne unhein dekha tou nahi? Khudara unhein apna naam na bata dena kaheen woh tumhei bhee galay se na laga lein ۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔             [...]

]]> By: Almas Hashmi http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-12029 Almas Hashmi Tue, 11 Aug 2009 07:47:41 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-12029 Neelum tum bohat acha likhti ho Neelum tum bohat acha likhti ho

]]> By: Anwer Zahidi http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11906 Anwer Zahidi Mon, 03 Aug 2009 05:41:04 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11906 Neelam despite being short the poem is very sublte direct & touching Neelam despite being short the poem is very sublte direct & touching

]]> By: Raza Yaseen http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11497 Raza Yaseen Thu, 25 Jun 2009 06:21:33 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11497 Please visit my Urdu ghazal blog, Khahish-E Sang, @ khahish-esang.blogspot.com and English ghazal blog, The Tree of Voice, @ thetreeofvoice.blogspot.com. Please visit my Urdu ghazal blog, Khahish-E Sang, @ khahish-esang.blogspot.com and English ghazal blog, The Tree of Voice, @ thetreeofvoice.blogspot.com.

]]> By: sheeba Aslam Fehmi http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11484 sheeba Aslam Fehmi Wed, 24 Jun 2009 08:10:12 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11484 Bahot Khoob! Kaash woh Khudkush Larka wapis ho jaey! Bahot Khoob!
Kaash woh Khudkush Larka wapis ho jaey!

]]> By: neelam ahmad basheer http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11479 neelam ahmad basheer Wed, 24 Jun 2009 06:56:02 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11479 thanx 2 everyoneone who appreciated my poem,specially to my son,whom i have not seen in two years,as he is faraway,please say a prayer for his health,i thank u thanx 2 everyoneone who appreciated my poem,specially to my son,whom i have not seen in two years,as he is faraway,please say a prayer for his health,i thank u

]]> By: Saira Ansari http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11478 Saira Ansari Wed, 24 Jun 2009 05:16:30 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11478 Brilliant. the harsh realities lie in the simplest of moments and that has been conveyed beautifully. Brilliant. the harsh realities lie in the simplest of moments and that has been conveyed beautifully.

]]> By: shehla siddiqui http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11471 shehla siddiqui Tue, 23 Jun 2009 21:51:42 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11471 neelam ji apko parha ahmed basheer sahab ko parha brunch with bushra main apko dekh or yaqwwn manye...aap se mohabat ho gai aap ki shakhsiyat boht powerful hy kia likhon ap ki tareef main k alfaz sath nai day rahay.agar aap k afsanay parhna chahon to kon se digest main parhon?plz reply neelam ji apko parha ahmed basheer sahab ko parha brunch with bushra main apko dekh or yaqwwn manye…aap se mohabat ho gai aap ki shakhsiyat boht powerful hy kia likhon ap ki tareef main k alfaz sath nai day rahay.agar aap k afsanay parhna chahon to kon se digest main parhon?plz reply

]]> By: shehla siddiqui http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11470 shehla siddiqui Tue, 23 Jun 2009 21:46:58 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11470 neelam ji amazing poem.aap waqai ahmed basheer ki beti hen blky mani ki beti hen kia nazam hay wah parh k maza aa gaya neelam ji amazing poem.aap waqai ahmed basheer ki beti hen blky mani ki beti hen kia nazam hay wah parh k maza aa gaya

]]> By: Saba http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11467 Saba Tue, 23 Jun 2009 16:56:54 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11467 Dear sughra and kashif,you are lucky to have her around.Please convey my regards to her. And my second post was for you Raza. Dear sughra and kashif,you are lucky to have her around.Please convey my regards to her.
And my second post was for you Raza.

]]> By: kashif siddiqui http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11465 kashif siddiqui Tue, 23 Jun 2009 16:13:16 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11465 This is my MOM!!! She writes really well. I am very proud of her. love u ammi. kashi This is my MOM!!! She writes really well. I am very proud of her. love u ammi.

kashi

]]> By: dr sughra sadaf http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11463 dr sughra sadaf Tue, 23 Jun 2009 13:40:05 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11463 neelam bashir is a renowned short story writer of this time. she has a different style of seeing and writing she is my neighbour and good friend and i m proud of her i hope she wl give some time to poetry. neelam bashir is a renowned short story writer of this time. she has a different style of seeing and writing she is my neighbour and good friend and i m proud of her i hope she wl give some time to poetry.

]]> By: Saba http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11462 Saba Tue, 23 Jun 2009 09:39:27 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11462 I like to read you, your views, opinions and perception of things is so different from the others...it is a feast for mind.Allah bless. I like to read you, your views, opinions and perception of things is so different from the others…it is a feast for mind.Allah bless.

]]> By: Saba http://razarumi.com/2009/06/22/khudkush-bambaar-larkay-say/#comment-11461 Saba Tue, 23 Jun 2009 09:27:51 +0000 http://www.razarumi.com/?p=1695#comment-11461 This is amazing! She has said so much in so little! My compliments to the poetess and please post some more of her work,would definitely like to read more of something so heartfelt...peace. This is amazing! She has said so much in so little! My compliments to the poetess and please post some more of her work,would definitely like to read more of something so heartfelt…peace.

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