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Doing as others told me/I was blind

Rumi’s Quatrain (no 77) can have so many interpretations

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Doing as others told me,
I was blind.
Coming when others called me,
I was lost.

Then I left everyone,
myself as well.
Then I found everyone,
myself as well.

– Version by Jonathan Star and Shahram Shiva
“A Garden Beyond Paradise”
Bantam Books, 1992

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for awhile
i chose myself to adore
losing me in me
i deserved no more
it seemed i couldn’t
see myself
yet i knew
when i stepped out
then me and myself
i beheld

– Translation by Nader Khalili
“Rumi, Dancing the Flame”
Cal-Earth Press, 2001

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For years, copying other people, I tried to know myself.
From within, I couldn’t decide what to do.
Unable to see, I heard my name being called.
Then I walked outside.

– Version by Coleman Barks
“Open Secret”
Threshold Books, 1984

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Imitating others,
I failed to find myself.
I looked inside and discovered
I only knew my name.
When I stepped outside
I found my real Self.

– Translation by Azima Melita Kolin
and Maryam Mafi
“Rumi: Whispers of the Beloved”
HarperCollins Publishers Ltd, 1999

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2 Comments to “Doing as others told me/I was blind”

  1. Rumi’s poetry melts the heart and inspires the soul to experience the ecstatic love. It transposes one into the mystical world of the infinite.

    And also I want to add that I found this blog quite interesting, really I like it very much.

    Here I found rumi’s poetry, well I want to ask one thing ‘what is the meaning of Quatrian, is it means poem’!!

    I want to share with all of Rumi lovers, the treasure of Rumi poems, Zikr which I found on Gurumaa.com

    On 14th Feb, 2007, there was a special sufi event called ‘Zikr’ was happened by Sufi Dervishes from Turkey, especially invited by Anandmurti Gurumaa to spread the fragnance of Love in India..

  2. Rose
    Many thanks for visiting the blog..
    A quatrain is a four lined poem – consisting of two rhymed couplets (like the ghazal. It is supposed to be a self contained poetic form that touches on a wide range of subjects and ideas in those four lines.

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