Comments on: ….na junoon raha na pari rahi – when neither you exist nor I exist

By: MURAFIQ MAZHER

MURAFIQ MAZHER — Sat, 04 Feb 2012 13:20:16 +0000

COMMENDABLE

By: Taimur tareen

Taimur tareen — Fri, 12 Nov 2010 03:56:00 +0000

So beatiful, can not even express. Opened a totally new world

By: kamran khan

kamran khan — Fri, 25 Jun 2010 05:33:01 +0000

This is amazing.Just amazing.Amir nice comments and corrections

By: kiran

kiran — Mon, 15 Feb 2010 10:47:17 +0000

wah thnk u vry much it was vry nice specially explaination

By: zahoor

zahoor — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 17:56:58 +0000

thanks zahoor

By: uzma

uzma — Tue, 05 Jan 2010 17:08:46 +0000

awsom i loved it..

By: zahoor

zahoor — Sun, 05 Jul 2009 15:14:05 +0000

i think readers of this discussion will enjoy my podcast featuring the same ghazal
http://urdusher.blogspot.com/2008/04/new-podcast.html

By: AamirR

AamirR — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 23:24:53 +0000

Sorry to be a spoilsport but there are some glaring typos in transliteration.

“Woh ajab ghari thi mein jis ghari” should be “Woh ajab ghari thi keh jis ghari” but that is not a big deal. This one is:

“Tere josh-e-hairat-e-husn ka, asar iss qadar so yahan hua”, should be “Tere josh-e-hairat-e-husn ka, asar iss qadar so ‘AyaN’ hua”. YahaN and AyaN change the whole meaning of the verse. Look to the translation where Yahan is meant as ones heart, whereas AyaN means to come into view, to emerge. If I may offer an alternative:

Bewildered by your beauty (Josh-e-hairat-e-husn), the effect of it (the force of your beauty) emerged with such passionate energy that the mirror (heart) lost its shine and conventional good looks lost their efficaciousness.

All the best. Continue this great work.

By: Bilal Cheema

Bilal Cheema — Thu, 02 Jul 2009 06:54:54 +0000

beautiful and meaningful translation

By: Aleem

Aleem — Mon, 02 Mar 2009 16:29:12 +0000

Wah… Jazak Allah!

By: Mrs M. Mumtaz

Mrs M. Mumtaz — Tue, 25 Nov 2008 16:17:10 +0000

Muqarar-muqarar! Dil se shuqriya is intehayi khubsoorat tarjume ke liye! Kya zauq-e-nazar payi hain! Wah! Wah! Jeete rahen!

For newbeginners hindi-reading Zaug-e-sukandon ke liye, do check out ISBN 81-900253-0-9 :Intekhat-o-Lughat. Besides thematic anthology of 500 verses, it also contains a helpful dictionary of 10.000 Urdu words both in Hindi and English.

By: shehla Masood

shehla Masood — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 07:31:56 +0000

superb

By: M.U.Ahmad

M.U.Ahmad — Tue, 12 Feb 2008 11:39:25 +0000

I wish some one could poetically translate it and other urdu poetry. I have not seen many good translations. Some are really funny and rediculous. Wants to read some good one? Here are few:

“”Go hatho mein jumbish nahin ——————-Rahne do abhi saghar -o- meena mere aage”" Ghalib.

“”No life my fluttering hands retain
Say not my love for wine a vain
Before me let the cups remain
Hands can not but eyes can drain.”"

“” Rzzaq-e-do-jahan ke khazane ko kiya hua
Milta hai ghum woh bhi kisi ka diya hua”" Hafeez Jalundheri.

“”What has become to the teasure of GOD
who gives sustenance to both the worlds
I am given only grief
That too by some one else”".

By: Sidhusaaheb

Sidhusaaheb — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 17:10:47 +0000

Waah!

By: RR

RR — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 16:35:40 +0000

Yes I also thought that this was rather splendid
Brings out the essence – as the original is nearly impossible to be translated in verse