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Two poems with a fresh diction
Ayesha Salman is a sensitive writer. Like many new writers, she is searching for the right publisher. She is currently revising the manuscript of her first novel.
I am posting her two moving poems “Mother” and “Love”. Her poem Mother was earlier published in the Smoke magazine, UK. I like her imagery that is both stark and colourful. Both the poems have a haunting quality
August 10th, 2006 at 4:59 pm
Interesting. thanks. great blog..
August 10th, 2006 at 5:56 pm
Naveed, thanks…
February 24th, 2007 at 10:43 pm
i hate this poem…. it sucks i dont know what it means and i know that alot of us dont but work harder and maybe you will find or do better work k but you are pretty so there is a plus for you
March 20th, 2007 at 1:00 pm
Both poems are beautiful..a touching simplicity and sensitive exploration of meaning.I loved this oriental depth of feelling in approaching both topics:mother and love.I’m a poet myself and I felt and was moved by the tenderness of what you tried to express. Thank you
April 19th, 2007 at 12:02 am
Very VERY beautiful and well written poems. i loved LOVER more than mother but mother was still amazingly well written and worded. you seem like a EXTREMELY wonderful writer… you will go far. mah ehs alamie…
April 21st, 2007 at 3:36 pm
“hate”, “sucks”? Just because you didn’t “understand” Ayesha’s work surely does not warrant a reaction as violent and extreme as yours Jessica. If I were you, I’d refrain from speaking on behalf of all the other readers.
Please don’t blame your inabilitiy to understand something on another person’s efforts to express herself.
Ayesha - I love your work - “always have”.
Cheers!